Zinsser's writing advice was very specific. He made me think of how many stuff I write down on my paper and don't even need it. He is trying to explain to the writers that they should just go straight to the point. When I was revising my paper I tried to follow his advice and I had to cut a lot of words out. I was repeating myself a lot and also using words that I did not need. Something that I learned so far is to cut down some of the words that I don't need and also to stop repeating myself. It would really help my papers be more interesting.